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Winner - Spring Fling Kidlit Writing Contest!

5/25/2021

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I am absolutely thrilled to announce that my Spring Flight Kidlit Writing Contest entry, Grandad's Butterflies,  placed 12th!

I have been entering Kidlit writing contests for about a year and this is first time I've placed. The last writing contest I won was my 5th grade DARE essay contest... which was many, many years ago. 

I was beginning to feel discouraged about my writing, but now I understand what it means when people say that "failing forward" is all part of the journey. 12th place may not seem so impressive to you, but it's transformed my writing self-esteem! All of the entries were UH-MAZING!!! You can check out the other winners, as well as all of the wonderful entires here. 

Winners were given a choice of prizes. I picked a manuscript critique from author extraordinaire Ana Siqueira!

Thank you so much to Kaitlyn and Ciara for hosting this wonderful contest. 

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Grandad's Butterflies - My Spring Fling Kidlit Writing Contest Entry

4/1/2021

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My favorite place in this big, beautiful world in the Coronado Monarch Butterfly Preserve. 

I've always dreamt of bringing my children to see the butterflies. But there is a HUGE problem: The monarch population has seen a 99.9% decline since the 1980s! This is due to climate change and deforestation affecting the growth of milkweed. Milkweed is where they lay their eggs and is the ONLY food for their caterpillars.

Luckily, these gorgeous invertebrates aren't extinct yet!

You can help the monarchs! Here's how: 
  • Try and plant as much milkweed as possible!
  • And, if you have the means, you can donate to the Xerces Society, an invertebrate conservation group. 

I wrote this piece with my monarch friends in my heart. I want my children and my children's children to feel the same flutter of joy I felt when visiting the thousands of butterflies at the monarch preserve.

​Together, we can save this species! 

Click here find out more about the Spring Fling Kidlit Writing Contest! 
Thank you to Ciara O'Neal and Kaitlyn Sanchez for hosting! :) 

Grandad's Butterflies
by Gennie Gorback
149 Words

Grandad could talk about butterflies for hours. I knew his stories by heart. 

He spoke of springtime visits to the monarch preserve. 
And of the near-silent fluttering of tens of thousands of monarchs, resting there before heading north. 
Grandad said the butterflies looked like confetti decorating the sky.  
He’d use my black and orange crayons to draw the wing patterns that danced in his memories. 

Finally, my footsteps crunched the same path my grandfather walked as a boy. 

I approached a clearing and prepared to be amazed.

Then--
        my arms drooped
                                      like
                                            broken 
                                                      wings. 

Where were all of the butterflies? 

There were some, but it wasn't like the photos on Grandad’s wall. 

Grandad was gone. His butterflies... disappearing. 

I wandered down the trail and collapsed onto the grass.

There, I found a milkweed plant. Tiny butterfly eggs dotted the underside of its leaves. 

Grandad’s butterfly story wasn’t over yet.

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Foodie Faire - My 50 Precious Words Writing Contest Entry!

3/2/2021

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I did it! I entered my most challenging writing contest yet! This one was a real DOOZY!! 

Vivian Kirkfield's 50 Precious Words Contest challenges the writer to create a story using 50 words or less! I was afraid to enter, very afraid. But, a little cheerleading from my critique partners went a long way... and suddenly I was *inspired!*

I wrote one. It wasn't good enough.
Then I wrote another and another.
Eventually, I had five options and still felt very unsure of myself. 

I finally settled on FOODIE FAIRE. 

This piece was inspired by my pre-pandemic travels. I love-love-loved going to unique food markets and faires around the world! While writing this piece, I remembered the sights, sounds and smells of one market in particular: Mercat De La Boqueria in Barcelona. It had stall after stall of fruits, meats and treats! And there were little bars peppered throughout the market where visitors could sit down for a meal. 
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Entrance to La Boqueria in Barcelona

Foodie Faire (49 Words) 
By Gennie Gorback

Fish flop,
Knives chop.

Doughs tumble,
Tummies rumble.

Hello, Foodie Faire.

Chefs grin,
Shawarmas spin.

Sauces ooze,
What to choose?

Exciting, Foodie Faire. 

Eggs crack,
Tortillas smack.

Find a chair,
Let’s all share!

Yummy, Foodie Faire. 

Noodles slurp,
Excuse the burp.


Eating’s done,
That was fun!

Bye-bye, Foodie Faire. 
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Photos from my 2014 visit to La Boqueria
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Storystorm 2021, a Huge Success!

2/20/2021

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Storystorm is a yearly challenge created by author extraordinaire Tara Lazar. The challenge asks participants to write down an idea a day for the entire month of January. This year was my first time participating and I LOVED it! 

I had no idea how many ideas I let slip away throughout the day before I started writing everything down! It's amazing how many picture book ideas come up in everyday conversations with my kids. I ended up with a whopping 104 ideas and have already drafted two new manuscripts from my Storystorm list. 

This challenge was a great reminder for me to stay open to ideas at all times and to WRITE THEM DOWN while they're still fresh in my mind! 

Did you participate in Storystorm 2021? 

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Valentiny Writing Contest 2021

2/18/2021

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This piece was originally posted on my other site on February 12, 2021. 
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Hello, hello! I guess I am eventually going to have to start a separate blog to focus on my writing... but for now, I will post my contest entries here! 
It's the 6th Annual Valentiny Writing Contest from Susanna Leonard Hill. Here are the rules: the piece must not exceed 214 words, it must be geared toward children (12 and under), and it must have a full story arc. This year's theme is all about being brave!

Read more about Susanna's contest here: https://susannahill.com/2021/02/12/be-brave-my-heart-the-6th-annual-valentiny-contest-is-here/

Thank you for reading my Valentiny story: 

BEE BRAVE 
by Gennie Gorback
(214 Words) 
The hive was a-buzz about this year’s Valentine’s day writing contest. Well, except Beatrice.
Two years ago, Beatrice had an idea for a poem. She’d call it: “The Pollen Not Taken.” But thinking about someone else reading her work made her knees knock and her stripes wobble. She broke out in hives and never finished a first draft. 
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Her cousin won that year:

Bee Mine 
by Bartlebee

​BEE Mine. 
It was sweet. It was succinct. It was bee-utiful! 

Last year was even worse. She considered entering her poem, “Buzzing Through the Woods on a Snowy Evening.” But doubt wormed its way into her brain and stuck like honey. She never even submitted it. 
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Another cousin won: 

Bee My Valentine 
by Shelbee

BEE My Valentine. 
The judges thought it was genius. 

This time would be different. Beatrice spent the entire year busily building up her confidence. She joined a critter critique group. She attended Snail Silverstein’s writing courses and a webinar hosted by Laura Ingalls Spider.
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She was determined to be brave and enter the contest. Her antennae shook as she finished her poem, “How Do I Love Bee?” She was filled with fear… but she submitted it anyway. 

​Beatrice was proud. It didn’t matter what the judges thought, she already felt like a winner. 

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Holiday Helpers Writing Contest 2020

2/18/2021

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Here's another writing contest entry that I'm copying over from my other site.  This one was originally posted on December 6, 2020. 

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I'm back again, entering another Kidlit writing contest!
This one was super fun! It's the 10th Annual Holiday Contest from Susanna Leonard Hill. Here are the rules: the piece must not exceed 250 words, it must be geared toward children (12 and under), it must have a full story arc and it must be about a Holiday Helper.
Read more about Susanna's contest here: https://susannahill.com/2020/12/07/ho-ho-ho-the-10th-annual-holiday-contest-is-here/
I am honored to present to you, my Holiday Helper Contest Entry:
A NEW SPIN ON HANUKKAH 
By Genevieve Gorback
The smell of freshly fried latkes filled the air. 

Silverware clattered. 

Everyone chattered.

Everyone except my brother Eli.

He had stepped away from the table. We’d been practicing our Hanukkah skit all day. Eli said he wanted to participate, but his furrowed brow told a different story. I handed him his noise-canceling headphones. Relieved, he returned to the cheery group.

While the adults cleaned up dinner and set out platters of ooey-gooey jelly donuts, the cousins went to play. But Eli was spinning in the corner.

Eli is autistic and he is always spinning. When he is upset, he spins as fast as a tornado. When he is happy, he twirls like a graceful jellyfish. Sometimes I spin with him, which makes him laugh.

Now, Eli was spiiinnnniiiinnnnggg! He was definitely worried about the skit. I had to help… but how?

I watched Cousin Jonah playing dreidel. The little top wibbled and wobbled until it fell down, showing the gimmel. He’d won! Then, I had a winning idea.

“Change of plans!” I told the kids.

When the grown ups finally sat down, it was showtime. We sang, “I have a little dreidel…” and twirled in circles. Eli happily spun around, too.

Near the end of the song, Eli fell. 

Everyone froze, worried that he might be upset.
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But instead, he continued acting like a dreidel and yelled, "Gimmel!"

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Everybody cheered. Eli’s smile was as bright as the light of the menorah. And I’m pretty sure mine was, too. 
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Fall Writing Frenzy 2020

2/18/2021

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The Kindling Education Blog usually features tips and tricks for educating young children, but today I am offering you something completely different: an original Board Book manuscript!

I am thrilled to be entering my *first* writing contest. If you know me in real life, then I've probably talked your ear off about my passion for children's books.
(Do you follow my picture book themed Instagram page?)

The Fall Writing Frenzy is a #kidlit contest, featuring entries that fall [see what I did there?] into the following categories: Board Books, Picture Books, Middle Grade or Young Adult. The Fall Writing Frenzy writing contest was created by #Kidlit superstars Lydia Lukidis and Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez. All entries must be 200 words or less and inspired by one of the 15 photos provided. To learn more about the Fall Writing Frenzy, click here.

For more about my writing journey, follow me on Twitter!

My entry was inspired by image #14, the sunflower.
Sunflower’s Treat
By Gennie Gorback
(176 Words) 

[Wordless page: A small sunflower watches Trick-or-Treaters on a cloudy Halloween evening. Speech bubbles indicate that children are saying, “Trick or treat!” “Thank you!” and “Happy Halloween!”]

Plip-plip-plip. 
Raindrops drip. 

Hustle, bustle.
Leaves rustle. 

Ca-lump, ca-lomp.
Rainboots stomp.

Ding-dong-ding.
Doorbells sing. 

Crinkle, plop.
Candies drop. 

Splish, splash, roar.
Raindrops pour! 

Ska-welch, sa-wish. 
Costumes squish. 

Sploosh, bloop.
Petals droop.

“Poor sunflower, you’re getting a shower!” 
[Illustration: A young girl in a sunflower costume is holding an umbrella. The sunflower is drenched.]

[Wordless page: The girl holds her umbrella over the sunflower]

Drizzle, trickle. 
Just a tickle. 
[Illustration: raindrops are not falling on the sunflower’s petals anymore, but the mist is tickling its leaves.] 

Swoosh, sway.
Clouds don’t stay.
[Illustration: The girl is smiling at the sunflower under the umbrella. The rain is slowing.]

Plink, plop. 
Small seeds drop. 
[Illustration: The sunflower is dropping seeds into the girl’s trick-or-treat bucket.] 

“Thank you, Sunflower! Happy Halloween!” 

[Wordless page: The happy sunflower raises a leaf to wave goodbye as the girl waddles down the sidewalk, holding hands with her grownup.]
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New Website!

2/18/2021

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Hello Hello and welcome to www.genniegorback.com! 

I've been using my education consulting business blog to post entries for writing contests and finally decided to create a space where those  posts made some more sense. 

Buckle up and come along with me on this new writing adventure! 

Say hi in the comments below! :) 

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